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New manga - Game Plan

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:45 am
by inkhana
Game Plan link

Not sure what else to say but "hope you enjoy it." :)

Edit: Forgot to include ratings. For ages...I dunno...ten and up maybe? Mild violence in only one part. No skimpy outfits, no nudity, no bad language. Slapstick humor...get used to it, I guess. ;)

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:51 am
by Omega Amen
SHE'S BACK!!!

*clears throat.*

I will check this new manga out, inkhana. Thanks.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:14 am
by Shinja
wha? who? where? manga! Glad your back!

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 9:40 am
by TheMelodyMaker
Wow, this is totally awesome! ^_____^ And, might I add, I rather enjoy what the poster and dolls in the store window are advertising. ;) :lol:

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 10:06 am
by Mithrandir
Yeaaaaaaaaaah!

*runs off to read*

PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:06 pm
by oro!
I am liking the theme(as i am a gamer, too).

Just wondering, is this going to be a manga with underlying Christian themes, or just one with Christian characters?

PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:17 pm
by Radical Dreamer
:D Wow, it looks fantastic! Your art style is so impressive, and it's so well laid-out! Excellent work, keep it up! :thumb:

PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 6:56 am
by inkhana
Thanks for the comments, guys. :)

Oro! - Yes, this will have Christian themes, not just Christian characters. Pretty soon they'll become more obvious. As usual, it's taking me a while to get going. haha

PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:32 am
by Raiden no Kishi
: : reads FAQ, goes off to write a sappy LockexKai songfic : :

.rai//

[spoiler] This is my sorry, sorry attempt at an April Fool's. You may laugh at its patheticity if you wish. [/spoiler]

PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:55 pm
by Pepper Kittie
Yaaaaay Ink! ^__^ This is great so far! You're moving so quickly. It's really neat to see your work again. Keep it up! I'm praying for you, and this project, too. Yay for gamers.

*points to a page* Oooh ooh, I see my charas! XD You're amazing, Ink.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 5:48 am
by Gypsy
inkhana wrote:As usual, it's taking me a while to get going. haha


No problem whatsoever! I think we're all just happy that you're back!

PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:43 pm
by ChristianKitsune
SHE'S BAAACK!!! I AM EXCITED NOWZ!! *goes off to read it* (but at a slow pace, as I should be working on homework..>_<)

PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 7:56 pm
by Icarus
This is what I get for not keeping up with this forum.

This is probably the best thing that happened on my birthday.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:40 am
by Mave
Inky, all I have to say is: WELCOME BACK!!! *glomps*

I feel so alive, the CAA webmanga veterans are coming back in full force!

General Comments:

Considering that I'm hardly a gamer, I find the premise interesting. I feel bad for the dog (what a name). This group is quite a rough bunch. LOL I'm not sure if I need to respond to your email (which I'm taking forever to reply) but as a whole, it's looking really good. I haven't had problems with the flow and the backgrounds are good (I know, it's a lot of work but it's worthed it!). You're using a bigger variety of tones and sound effects than before and it works. Nuts, I could learn a lot from you and Gypsy actually.

Huzzah for the inspiration!

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:04 am
by inkhana
Nah, there's no reason to reply to the email, Mave. :) I'm just glad you enjoyed it. I do feel like I've learned a lot since my last attempt at webmanga; people have really commented on how my skills have improved (they should have...looking back at SB, it makes me feel very bad...hahaha) I'm surprised anyone can learn anything from me, though, I always thought of myself as the amateur of the group, since I was such a newcomer to manga. ;) So many of you grew up with manga, and then came the 18-year-old who suddenly says "hey, I wanna draw that!"

Thanks to everyone else who's reading and commenting. Chapter 2 will be concluded shortly and the archive will be posted.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:24 pm
by ShiroiHikari
Yay~ Looking great so far. I can't wait to see where you're going with the story. :3

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:01 pm
by KeybladeWarrior
Very good artwork and story. Great job!

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:52 pm
by inkhana
Chapter 2 is now completely uploaded. :)

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:58 am
by Raiden no Kishi
YAY! Update get!

Oh no . . . is that some ANGST I smell? ^_^

.rai//

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:32 pm
by OtakusForChrist
This is a really good manga, its nice to reade something thats not filled with nudity or skimpy outfits and has a good christian message...
IT ROCKS

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 2:08 pm
by Gypsy
YAY FOR UPDATES!! And a ST cameo?! *eyes all big and shiny* THANK YOU THAT'S SO COOL!!

I love Julia's design, and despite what a pain her hair was, I think it was really worth it. Her pages are all very stunning. And I laughed so hard when I got to the ice-cream-headache-on-the-outside page! Her expression was priceless! Keep up the awesome work, Ink!

PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 11:42 am
by AsianBlossom
This is great stuff. The artwork is wonderful, the story intriguing...if this were published, I'd so totally buy it.

PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 3:47 pm
by inkhana
Thanks guys! It's much appreciated.

I owed you at least a small cameo for the SB cameo in ST, Gypsy. XD Not to mention yours actually had dialogue, so I feel a bit like you got cheated. ^^;;;;

Here's a bit of news: to celebrate my reaching the 50 page milestone, have not only the conclusion to chapter three, but also four pages posted! :3 Woot. Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to take a little downtime to draw more pages. That's the part that stinks for everyone involved. lol

PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 10:03 pm
by Ashley
Well, I think I speak for many when we say that we're just happy to get some really awesome manga of yours to read!

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:17 pm
by TheMelodyMaker
*rings a giant bell* Hear ye, hear ye! :grin: For those following along, Ink's got Chapter 4 up and ready for your viewing pleasure.

And for those not following along, go read the whole thing from the beginning! You know you want to. ;)

That is all. ^_^ *drops the bell on his foot* ...Ow.

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:15 am
by Gypsy
Nice update!! I love Tremble's flex when they're in the tree- too funny!

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:13 pm
by USSRGirl
*Finally making comments on the webmanga I've been browsing*

Wow, Inkhana, your art is some of the best I've ever seen. Very professional. Great story line too.

PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:15 am
by TheMelodyMaker
Woohoo!~ After a long wait, Ink's got all of Chapter 5 up and ready to read -- and it's her longest chapter yet. Go lookest thou, all ye who keep interest! :D

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 5:42 am
by Nikolai Melodie
Hun, may I just say that before I was even a Christian I would squeal over this story =O? Your art is awesome, and I can't wait for more <3

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:10 am
by Mave
You know, I never quite commented on that page in Chapter 5. Those three sure look familiar. XD

Comments:
1) The finer lineart is Ok with me. It gives the comic more of a shoujo touch. Hopefully that is what you're aiming for.
2) The silhouette of Jesus is fine in my mind. Shadows are great for such depictions. XD
3) Locke is a lot more angsty than I expect. Not a bad thing, especially when it gets explained. ;)
4) Tremble in dog clothing/cosplay is quite....disturbing in an amusing way. LOL

Huzzah ~ Chapter 6 and going strong! Will comment more when I read the rest of the pages. Go, Inky!