New manga - Game Plan

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New manga - Game Plan

Postby inkhana » Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:45 am

Game Plan link

Not sure what else to say but "hope you enjoy it." :)

Edit: Forgot to include ratings. For ages...I dunno...ten and up maybe? Mild violence in only one part. No skimpy outfits, no nudity, no bad language. Slapstick humor...get used to it, I guess. ;)


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Postby Omega Amen » Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:51 am

SHE'S BACK!!!

*clears throat.*

I will check this new manga out, inkhana. Thanks.
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Postby Shinja » Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:14 am

wha? who? where? manga! Glad your back!
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Postby TheMelodyMaker » Fri Mar 30, 2007 9:40 am

Wow, this is totally awesome! ^_____^ And, might I add, I rather enjoy what the poster and dolls in the store window are advertising. ;) :lol:
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Postby Mithrandir » Fri Mar 30, 2007 10:06 am

Yeaaaaaaaaaah!

*runs off to read*
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Postby oro! » Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:06 pm

I am liking the theme(as i am a gamer, too).

Just wondering, is this going to be a manga with underlying Christian themes, or just one with Christian characters?
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Postby Radical Dreamer » Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:17 pm

:D Wow, it looks fantastic! Your art style is so impressive, and it's so well laid-out! Excellent work, keep it up! :thumb:
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Postby inkhana » Sun Apr 01, 2007 6:56 am

Thanks for the comments, guys. :)

Oro! - Yes, this will have Christian themes, not just Christian characters. Pretty soon they'll become more obvious. As usual, it's taking me a while to get going. haha


BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?

You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra

(in response to an interview question "Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?")
People who write below their abilities in order to crank out tons of books and make a buck. Especially Christian authors who do that. Outsiders judge us for it, and make fun of us for it, and it makes Jesus look bad. We of all artists on earth should be the most concerned with doing our best possible work at all times. We of all people should write with all our hearts, as if writing for the Lord and not for men.
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Postby Raiden no Kishi » Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:32 am

: : reads FAQ, goes off to write a sappy LockexKai songfic : :

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Postby Pepper Kittie » Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:55 pm

Yaaaaay Ink! ^__^ This is great so far! You're moving so quickly. It's really neat to see your work again. Keep it up! I'm praying for you, and this project, too. Yay for gamers.

*points to a page* Oooh ooh, I see my charas! XD You're amazing, Ink.
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Postby Gypsy » Fri Apr 13, 2007 5:48 am

inkhana wrote:As usual, it's taking me a while to get going. haha


No problem whatsoever! I think we're all just happy that you're back!
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Postby ChristianKitsune » Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:43 pm

SHE'S BAAACK!!! I AM EXCITED NOWZ!! *goes off to read it* (but at a slow pace, as I should be working on homework..>_<)
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Postby Icarus » Fri Apr 13, 2007 7:56 pm

This is what I get for not keeping up with this forum.

This is probably the best thing that happened on my birthday.
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Postby Mave » Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:40 am

Inky, all I have to say is: WELCOME BACK!!! *glomps*

I feel so alive, the CAA webmanga veterans are coming back in full force!

General Comments:

Considering that I'm hardly a gamer, I find the premise interesting. I feel bad for the dog (what a name). This group is quite a rough bunch. LOL I'm not sure if I need to respond to your email (which I'm taking forever to reply) but as a whole, it's looking really good. I haven't had problems with the flow and the backgrounds are good (I know, it's a lot of work but it's worthed it!). You're using a bigger variety of tones and sound effects than before and it works. Nuts, I could learn a lot from you and Gypsy actually.

Huzzah for the inspiration!
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Postby inkhana » Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:04 am

Nah, there's no reason to reply to the email, Mave. :) I'm just glad you enjoyed it. I do feel like I've learned a lot since my last attempt at webmanga; people have really commented on how my skills have improved (they should have...looking back at SB, it makes me feel very bad...hahaha) I'm surprised anyone can learn anything from me, though, I always thought of myself as the amateur of the group, since I was such a newcomer to manga. ;) So many of you grew up with manga, and then came the 18-year-old who suddenly says "hey, I wanna draw that!"

Thanks to everyone else who's reading and commenting. Chapter 2 will be concluded shortly and the archive will be posted.


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SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?

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- Frank Capra

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Postby ShiroiHikari » Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:24 pm

Yay~ Looking great so far. I can't wait to see where you're going with the story. :3
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Postby KeybladeWarrior » Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:01 pm

Very good artwork and story. Great job!
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Postby inkhana » Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:52 pm

Chapter 2 is now completely uploaded. :)


BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?

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Postby Raiden no Kishi » Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:58 am

YAY! Update get!

Oh no . . . is that some ANGST I smell? ^_^

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Postby OtakusForChrist » Sat May 12, 2007 12:32 pm

This is a really good manga, its nice to reade something thats not filled with nudity or skimpy outfits and has a good christian message...
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Postby Gypsy » Sat May 12, 2007 2:08 pm

YAY FOR UPDATES!! And a ST cameo?! *eyes all big and shiny* THANK YOU THAT'S SO COOL!!

I love Julia's design, and despite what a pain her hair was, I think it was really worth it. Her pages are all very stunning. And I laughed so hard when I got to the ice-cream-headache-on-the-outside page! Her expression was priceless! Keep up the awesome work, Ink!
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Postby AsianBlossom » Sun May 13, 2007 11:42 am

This is great stuff. The artwork is wonderful, the story intriguing...if this were published, I'd so totally buy it.
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Postby inkhana » Thu May 17, 2007 3:47 pm

Thanks guys! It's much appreciated.

I owed you at least a small cameo for the SB cameo in ST, Gypsy. XD Not to mention yours actually had dialogue, so I feel a bit like you got cheated. ^^;;;;

Here's a bit of news: to celebrate my reaching the 50 page milestone, have not only the conclusion to chapter three, but also four pages posted! :3 Woot. Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to take a little downtime to draw more pages. That's the part that stinks for everyone involved. lol


BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?

You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra

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Postby Ashley » Thu May 17, 2007 10:03 pm

Well, I think I speak for many when we say that we're just happy to get some really awesome manga of yours to read!
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Postby TheMelodyMaker » Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:17 pm

*rings a giant bell* Hear ye, hear ye! :grin: For those following along, Ink's got Chapter 4 up and ready for your viewing pleasure.

And for those not following along, go read the whole thing from the beginning! You know you want to. ;)

That is all. ^_^ *drops the bell on his foot* ...Ow.
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Postby Gypsy » Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:15 am

Nice update!! I love Tremble's flex when they're in the tree- too funny!
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Postby USSRGirl » Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:13 pm

*Finally making comments on the webmanga I've been browsing*

Wow, Inkhana, your art is some of the best I've ever seen. Very professional. Great story line too.
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Postby TheMelodyMaker » Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:15 am

Woohoo!~ After a long wait, Ink's got all of Chapter 5 up and ready to read -- and it's her longest chapter yet. Go lookest thou, all ye who keep interest! :D
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Postby Nikolai Melodie » Fri Aug 24, 2007 5:42 am

Hun, may I just say that before I was even a Christian I would squeal over this story =O? Your art is awesome, and I can't wait for more <3
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Postby Mave » Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:10 am

You know, I never quite commented on that page in Chapter 5. Those three sure look familiar. XD

Comments:
1) The finer lineart is Ok with me. It gives the comic more of a shoujo touch. Hopefully that is what you're aiming for.
2) The silhouette of Jesus is fine in my mind. Shadows are great for such depictions. XD
3) Locke is a lot more angsty than I expect. Not a bad thing, especially when it gets explained. ;)
4) Tremble in dog clothing/cosplay is quite....disturbing in an amusing way. LOL

Huzzah ~ Chapter 6 and going strong! Will comment more when I read the rest of the pages. Go, Inky!
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