Paris

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Postby CreatureArt » Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:21 pm

Hey Mai, great comic so far.

I've really enjoyed going through it, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story continues and what will happen with the estate, too.
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Postby mai » Wed Jan 03, 2007 7:46 pm

Thank you <3 In chapter two it will go back to Paris and Auster and see who meets them at the train station.

Added pages 21 and 22. Sorry it has been so long and that they are a little messy. Better late then never -_-;
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Postby Kaori » Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:43 pm

Page 21 is a little less detailed than most of the others, but you really nailed the facial expression in the middle panel. The detail in the backgrounds of page 22 is nice, especially the curtain in the top panel. The tidbit of information about Jazzet is interesting, too; I look forward to reading more.
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Postby mai » Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:07 am

Thanks ^-^
I drew page 22 before 21. Basically I drew a bunch of panels then pasted them together on the computer, which I dislike doing.

Hope you continue to like it!
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Postby Mave » Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:03 am

*grin* Don't you worry, I've done that before too --> pasting panels on the computer

Good to see updates here. I'm curious to know what happens next. XD
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Postby mai » Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:42 pm

Added page 23 to Paris. chapter one is done, but I'm still going to add some notes and explanations to hopefully make it clearer.
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Postby Mave » Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:05 am

It's up to you. You need not add notes if you have some way of explaining things in the future chapters. :)
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Postby mai » Sat May 26, 2007 10:17 am

Finally added 5 pages....*dies*
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Postby mai » Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:55 pm

Ok, for some reason I can't edit my posts...Any way, I have a new website
here http://www.freespaces.com/thedarkgarden/index.html
I'm going to have a detailed rating for Paris on the website in a minute...
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