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Would someone mind proofreading this for me?

Postby Destroyer2000 » Mon Mar 06, 2006 3:52 pm

I had to explicate a poem, so I was wondering if anyone would proofread it and look for errors such as pronoun-antecedent agreement, subject-verb agreement, and the like. It would be very much appreciated. Thanks.

So We’ll Go No More A-Roving

The poem So We’ll go no more a-roving by George Byron is a poem of regret and yearning to teach others a lesson that the speaker missed. Enjoy life while the body is young and able to do things. This poem also has a sexual undertone.

The poem supports this with its line, “And the heart must pause to breathe,â€
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon Mar 06, 2006 4:04 pm


So We’ll Go No More A-Roving


The poem So We’ll go no more A-Roving by George Byron is a poem of regret and yearning to teach others a lesson the speaker missed. The message is to enjoy life while the body is young and still able to function properly. This poem also has a sexual undertone.

The poem supports this with its line, “And the heart must pause to breathe,â€
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Postby Destroyer2000 » Mon Mar 06, 2006 5:52 pm

Thanks.
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[color="RoyalBlue"]“Falling in love with someone isn't always going to be easy... Anger... tears... laughter.. It's when you want to be together despite it all. That's when you truly love another. I'm sure of it.â€
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