My first manga-toned piece!

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My first manga-toned piece!

Postby Uriah » Thu Sep 02, 2004 6:17 pm

This is the first drawing that I have actually toned and inked manga style. Anyways.. Does the hair and pants look ok? C+C is welcome.
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Postby RoyalWing » Thu Sep 02, 2004 6:30 pm

I think the hair and pants look good! But how about using some light gray to shade the skin? ^v^
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Postby uc pseudonym » Fri Sep 03, 2004 9:56 am

As a reader (not an artist) I can say that it looks okay, and I think you used toning/inking to your advantage. The skin does look pretty blank, however.
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Postby Archan » Sun Sep 05, 2004 2:57 pm

Hum......

Pants look fine, the inking looks fine as well, so does the highlights in the hair.

Something to note though, highlights (particularily in hair) are very sharp and usually a solid white in BW manga, though I like yours alot too it's more artistic with a natural stroke feel, so whichever way you choose to go would be fine.

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