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Woman With Sword

Postby Krypto306 » Mon Apr 18, 2005 6:06 pm

I want some feed back on my anime, so please tell me what you think ;)
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Postby Hephzibah » Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:16 pm

Very nice, though I might suggest making her hair blow the other way, as it seems she is in movement towards the right. If this were so, the hair would flow in the opposite direction, ie the left. Overall, however, a very nice pic. I love the texture you have created, and that sword looks so cooL! I want one!
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Postby soul alive » Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:23 pm

nice job. i love her expression. i agree about the hair movement. also, her lower body is a little bit misproportioned with the upper part, you might make her legs a tiny bit longer. :thumb:
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Postby Krypto306 » Tue Apr 19, 2005 10:23 pm

thanks for the feed back, but I need more or how else will I get better, thanks
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